Paper Cover Crit
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- k0na_an0k0
error traut
- ********0
oh lordy.
- k0na_an0k0
the link doesn't work in ff for some reason.
works on safari.
- ********0
Safari 'chips from the rough'
- e_b_c0
feeeeeks it. id like to come in at the start of one of these.
- ldww0
GOHI... it sounds jewish.
well, its very gay, if that is what you were going for. i think it could use a couple more rainbow flags thou.
- ********0
Not sure what the relevence of the war time propoganda means though.
And from an execution level, the 'photoshopping' of the flags on sams hat the lady workers collar needs to be improved
- paraselene0
image cannot be displayed, contains errors.
- ********0
It contains traces of nuts!
- johndiggity0
needs more gay.
- spendogg0
that certainly is very gay
- StuBru0
that's anything but gay. Hideous in the first place.
Start over.
- johndiggity0
what happened to the wrought-iron gate logo?
- StuBru0
what happened to the wrought-iron gate logo?
johndiggity
(Oct 18 06, 08:53)anally hidden by uncle sam
- traut0
started completed and had to goto print yesterday within about an hour so dont be too harsh and ya its gay its for a gay paper, the images not sure they've used those in previous work and wanted similar stuff for the cover. iron gate logo was a rough and you guys tore it up pissed on it lit it on fire but it wasnt even near being complete just started it but before i could explain it you already destroyed it
- e_b_c0
traut. i could be way off on this, but it looks like you used the computer from start to finish on the project. and for what it's worth i find that if i work out my proportions and layout on paper as a first step ,that my finals are much stronger. i don't know why it's easier to judge that stuff when it's not on screen.
just my impression. please take no offense if that's how you work as well.
(and start your crits while you still have time to refine.)
- traut0
I often start on the computer go through my images i have to work with if i have the time i throw some stuff down on paper and try a few concepts and then go back to the computer this on the other hand i had some images to work with and there logo and had to pull together everything and have it ready to print in under 2 hrs.
- e_b_c0
I often start on the computer go through my images i have to work with if i have the time i throw some stuff down on paper and try a few concepts and then go back to the computer this on the other hand i had some images to work with and there logo and had to pull together everything and have it ready to print in under 2 hrs.
traut
(Oct 18 06, 10:11)i have 2hour work also. and i show nobody.
- gramme0
why post for crit if it's already done?
Needs more manties.
