portfolio critique.
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- coolville
thecoolville.com is my portfolio.
i'd love some feedback.
i'd love some work out of it.
jon
- mrbee28280
because people are lazy
- mrbee28280
damn.. too slow
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- Bluejam0
your cv is terrible, drop that daft typeface. seems really amateur for a art director/associate creative director.
and the site is again, verging on the awful.
some good work tho
- Nairn0
Dumping shit in html doth not a webpage make.
a) Ditch that travesty of a landing page - it' messy, unnavigable and I'm actually physically annoyed that you've overlaid so many hi-res images, wasting my bandwidth.
b) As your Print Cafe work states 'Details get lost'. If you want a job, those details are important - some background info would be appreciated.
c) I didn't appreciate having 3 QT movies dumped on me at the same time, either.
d) just clean it up - i can't tell (and can't be bothered to investigate) what is going on.
e) 'thecoolville'?! Blecht...which is all a shame, as your print work seems pretty good - I just can't tell and am too angered by everything that came before.
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- dirtydesign0
Needs some structure.