logo critique
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- mg330
2 is too chaotic and would look abysmal in B&W.
I like #1, and hope this is for a windmill manufacturing company.
- Momentum20
this is for....
the transportation industry and the client creates traffic software
--so how does the logo apply to that ^
- mg330
Did you color out #2?
LMAO, I thought that was the logo!!!!!!!!
- radar0
what the hell is going on - is #2 a logo, or your very colorfully taking it out of the rotation?
#1 looks like it has potential, is there any type going with these marks?
- bunka0
got rid of #2
and the company is
Hamilton Signal Inc in denver
- PonyBoy0
work on your presentation, bunka... I'm confused as to what I'm looking at... as are many others...
... seperate out your work so it's not jammed so close together so we can 'view it'...
... what's up w/all the silly lines and big-ass 'newstoday critique' etc...
... i don't even want to look at the 'work'...
.. .cuz I CAN'T FIND IT amongst all the crud on my screen.
learn how to present and get back to us.
- ********0
needs more current
- ********0
Did you color out #2?
LMAO, I thought that was the logo!!!!!!!!
mg33
(Aug 15 06, 12:09)x2, hahaa.
BETELGEUSE!!
- jevad0
don't be so patronising ponyboy
what's your concept and thinking behind the mark?
- PonyBoy0
patronising? :)
dude... in order to get better... people need to hear that kinda stuff... I wasn't being 'mean'... was I?
I'm merely having flash backs to critiques in school when you'd get nearly laughed out of the classroom for showing up w/un-presentable work.
I can't critique this work w/out critiquing the presentation... because the presentation seems to be a part of the work!!!
I thought the red/pink blob shit was PART OF A LOGO!! hahaha... just like a bunch of other folks.
- jevad0
learn how to present and get back to us.
PonyBoy
(Aug 15 06, 12:30)That's just rude man! All the stuff you said before that was pretty helpful - then you had to chide him with a final blow!
you utter, utter bastard
; p
- rockonski0
you should be an abstract painter instead.
- bunka0
I apologize for the file and I have changed it to help Mr Pony out
they want something scientific/simple with a fractal if possible
- rockonski0
you could use a swirl for that fractal effect
i'm not liking this at all.
- PonyBoy0
hahaha...
touché...
... I didn't even realize I had 'tone' in that last statement until you pointed it out...
it was just my closing statement... and it should of had a smiley face next to it... cuz I was saying it to be helpful...
bunka...
... can you please fix your link so we can better critique your logo? :)... open up the presentation a bit...
:)
*smacks jevad clear across the ass-cheeks w/a wiffle-ball bat
- lherb0
Just a thought, a little smaller on the icon and maybe an angle to provide some added interest??
- rockonski0
Just a thought, a little smaller on the icon and maybe an angle to provide some added interest??
justbefrank.com/nt/new... [jpg]
lherb
(Aug 15 06, 13:08)i thought you wrote little angel and i was quite intrigued.
- radar0
needs more angel!