logo crit
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- ninjasavant0
b
- fate_0
I like the regular white type the best.
Also, suggestion for tagline replacement: "Share Big files. Forget Big Brother."
- fowler0
kinda looks like a ghost shooting out of the dude's hand. took me a sec to figure out what was going on.
- liquid0
nice suggestion fate...
- ukit0
Personally I like 2 the best but I'm confused - they're hiring you to make such a small change? Also, tagline seems to be gramatically incorrect.
- mnix210
Can you change the illustrated logo? Far too much detail and gradients will be a thing of the past within a year. Logo should stand up to the B/W test or at most a 3-color. Your monson and growing humanities logos are so much more solid.
Or were you just asking about the type?
- liquid0
monson? oh that was the design your ride logo.... its now just forwarding to my snowboard mfr.
They didn't hire me for such a small change. I am part of their company - marketing, branding, UI development. More inhouse then outhouse :-p
We are just looking to make the current logotype look friendlier. The logo itself is solid in terms of the concept so yes I was only asking about the type for now.
- liquid0
^bumpety - I need more feedback on this...
only looking at the type change...thx...
- Nairn0
Revision #2 seems the most in-keeping with the logo itself, imo.
I might consider trying to make some of the text details match your little netizen dudes - the top hilights could be a touch more prominent. Have you considered making the edges 'bolder' - like you have the borders on the dudes?
just some thoughts - i like #2 as it is though.
- anayafx0
i have to agree with fate.... the white looks the best... alhtough i'm not to hot on the font.
Also its kind of crammed in there. maybe the proportions of image and text are off in the logo.
... personally, I'd move the nav over to the right and reduce its size to give the logo more room.
- jevad0
any chance you could nix that drop shadow?
- tikal2k0
i like the font on the last one. color scheme is nice too.
- liquid0
the actual site has more spacing on the top....just looking for comments on the logotype color treatment...
- liquid0
posted b) on the actual site
- PonyBoy0
I CHOOSE B!!!
(did I miss the critique?)
- gramme0
either solid white or solid yellow.
some kerning issues:
You're a bit tight between the t/i/z in Netizen, and a hair wide between the first e & t, as well as the last e & n.I'd make the mark at least 30% smaller.