Monogram crit please
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- lherb0
Would also look good wrapped around a cigar!!!
- inky0
the on outside the circle..its classier......condier this my RSVP:its me and a guest.....congrats!
HA
- Fariska0
the last version with the oval looks fine. No more bananas, don't worry :-)
- gramme0
the one on the right, cause the first reminds me this brand:
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Fariska
(Jul 14 06, 08:04)um
Just b/c there's an oval? check the newest link, that oval is more geometric. I agree w/ everyone, the one on on the right doesn't work so well with all that scrolling. Makes me wanna put on a cravate and eat a croissanwich.
- lherb0
Looks great, good luck and congrats.
- skt0
I think the letter forms are a little heavy.
You're right about the brown and the light green though. Should look very nice.
- flavorful0
Sweet! Really makes a world of difference.
- jevad0
nice work mate - I like the left one too
- lherb0
I like the second (tweaked) version better with the more vertical oval.
Very Nice.
I agree with _salisae_ though the top of the p could be tweaked.
- gramme0
oh .. haha .. yeah that's funny. i'm actually a hermaphrodite so i don't catch on real fast.
_salisae_
(Jul 13 06, 14:52)come again?
- _salisae_0
oh .. haha .. yeah that's funny. i'm actually a hermaphrodite so i don't catch on real fast.
- _salisae_0
this is nit picky i realize
BUT
upon viewing it in the larger format .. the upward swoosh off the top of the p (where the ligature connects) could be a little more finessed .. looks like it could be an accident.
very pretty otherwise .. congratulations again!
- aliceblue0
sweet!!!
- gramme0
thx aliceblue! I was jokin too :)
- aliceblue0
I think you know exactly what you want and the brown is growing on me ... it'll look wonderful!
"and the "just a girl" thing was supposed to be a "joke" ;-)
- gramme0
I would concentrate on the light green and white. With the dark brown as an accent - would be softer
...but what do I know I'm just a "girl"
aliceblue
(Jul 13 06, 14:11)Well If the green's too light it won't be readable. The accent dark brown would read first. And it's already fairly soft, a lot softer than what I started with a few weeks ago...any more so and it would be too girly. plus my fiancee really digs that shade of brown...
But what do I know, I'm just a "guy"
:)
anybody else think the one on the left looks like a chocolate co. logo? I like it, but don't want people to drool on the nice expensive paper by accident...
- _salisae_0
that's a horrible outlook, aliceblue.
i like the left one as well but maybe with an upright container .. the italicized letters provide enough slanting