Logo Crit
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- pascii
a logo i am developing for a lounge bar. (disco with 60 -90s sound, beer etc.)
what do you think? the bar is called 5 stärn witch means, obviously, 5 star
- version30
on first glance, i felt "casino" like i should be gambling
- elms0
5
- _salisae_0
they look like gas station logos
- Concrete0
I like 5 + 3, in that order.
Not much variation of the typeface, or is it a re-brand?
- version30
and on 2nd look,
the top 3 remind me of of secondary logos like the engery star compliant sticker than comes on electronics and those little badges on cars explaining that you paid more for the up model
- canuck0
2 & 3 remind me of subaru. only because the way the stars are i guess.
- Blueman0
1-3 reminds me of Subaru.
out of the ones you have i like 8.
- version30
maybe that's what it was canuck
- dirtydesign0
They don't feel like lounge logos yet. Simplify. It's all about the typeface.
- Concrete0
They don't feel like lounge logos yet. Simplify. It's all about the typeface.
dirtydesign
(Jun 21 06, 06:59)I agree.
- Per_Guga0
I like number 7...
but try something more funny... it's a bar right? Remember that bar must be fun...
Also I'm wondering that the target is older people.... try some retro design....
see ya bro!
- version30
so far the range of emotions i've experienced are indian casino, detail badge, gas station, midwestern chain steakhouse
clean it up an hit them with a "5 star" illusion
your renderings are all so literal
and, as mentioned, a new typeface :)
- rasko40
must try harder - this looks cheap.
maybe you can think a bit more laterally rather than just umm errr oh yeah 5 stars.
2. is the only one I would veer towards but needs work.
- Baskerville0
use the fact that a pentagram has 5 points (5 stars etc)
- Concrete0
And you could do this:
5 T A R N
- ********0
instor instead of A in Starn a five pointstar.
here is two starns
http://www.starnstudio.com/
- grunttt0
i dig 8
- ********0
- spendogg0
It may be a bit cheeze, but us a star instead of the letter "A" - the five star graphic feels trite
