quick crit
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- desmo0
i just wanted some input in terms of letter forms. i wanted to know if it is easily readable or recognizable and it everything flows ok.
i am not too concerned with color at the moment.
thanks for the help guys.
im taking this sucker back to the drawing board.
- chunkified0
blue and white one r0x
- version30
is this for a shirt at claires boutique?
- johnnyonthespot0
what is the brief? what is the goal of this design? who is the audience?
If this is meant as a piece of visual communication, it doesn't matter if some random person does or doesn't like it, but rather whether or not it communicates what it needs to, to the audience to which it needs to communicate.
- chossy0
I like 1 and three but I read des ion mojo not design mojo......
- tiger0
I like them all
- Nairn0
!
(quickest crit ever)
- Shift5250
not a fan. sorry.
- desmo0
thanks very much.
i wasnt sure if i should keep design as one word or break it up into 2 pieces.
putting designmojo together as a logo makes it really long.
- blastofv0
without any background on the copmany/organization, looks pretty good – but watch the line weights... seems like they're inconsistent, although it could be an optical illusion with all the strokes/outlines and negative space
- jox0
not digging it. a little too messy and if it wasn't for the url i'm not sure i'd be able to read it.
try it without the white outline and make everything blend into eachother as opposed to just one or two letters. Or something.
- Nairn0
Des Ing Mojo sounds like an African.
- blastofv0
the 'i' is considerably thicker than the 'g' I think
- Nairn0
That's how *I* spell desing.
- Sven_sk0
looks pretty cool.
- pollypocket0
I like the idea of it an the shapes used. Its really unusual.
Number 1 is def my favourite one colour wise but is really depends on what its for...Try ome more combinations maybe?
I would definitely try the design all on one line with mojo below. You could still link the g and o together nicely.
Its all good mate.
- Baskerville0
back to the drawing board.
yes, actually use a paper and pen.
- johndiggity0
hot topic.
- grunttt0
without any background on the logo i think you should have a graphic of a squirrel doing cunnilingus to a panda bear in the background with a lime green drop shadow for the panda's "flower".
- ross0
deb-ion-mojo