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- redefine
this weekend i finally took some pics of some of my school work (print only) and dumped the images online. i literally just threw them into an html file so i DO NOT WANT A CRIT OF THE PAGE. please let me know what you think of the work.
- Nairn0
but they're all pages?
- HumanMale0
I like it. The Vogue thing is a bit wierd, but the rest is strong.
- stevegee0
you spelled "adsfadsfasdfsafasfsafdsafdaas" wrong at the bottom of the page
other than that, I like the work a lot, nice clean and clear messages on all of it
- redefine0
by page i meant the html page.
- pluto0
A bit fruity in the beginning, but nice overall
- Nairn0
ha.. exactly what humanmale said - everything there's lovely... 'cept that vogue thing - just feels empty.
UNAIDS thing is particularily nice.
and the ..er.. 'adsfadsfasdfsafasfsafdsafdaas' at the bottom is pushing your PAGE off my screen. :)
- Concrete0
All good. Information design is a bastard.
- kelpie0
good stuff, I really like it - really solid unfussy type, good color sense etc. thumbs up from the kelpster.
- redefine0
well the vogue thing was an information architecture project. we were to pick a magizine and break it down visually. it really needs to be bigger so you can read all the information. sorry for the small image
- kelpie0
it always amazes me, considering some of the utterly rank portfolios I've had the opportunity to look at over the last few years, how well considered, well rounded and professional some peoples uni work looks on here.
*stops licking redefines arse.
- redefine0
uni?
- kelpie0
school/college/university
tell me you didn't mean high school.
- kelpie0
word of advice though:
horizontal scrolling. bit last year.
- Terminal270
nice work.
where do / did you go to school?
- redefine0
no, i meant college.
as for the scrolling, it was just the way it worked out for dumping the images. i have no idea what i want to do when i actually make a site other than big images
- redefine0
massachusetts college of art in boston
- Dancer0
Very tight and unfussy
Gets my approval.
- kelpie0
(I was kidding about the site, no worries ;)
- kelpie0
you knopw you've done well when Dancer doesn't come in to the thread to slag off your kerning ;)
- Dancer0
:P