illustration critique
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- studio1108
hello everyone.
i am currently working on building my illustration portfolio and i would like a critique of the work included.cheers!
- nooner0
don't say we, if there is not a "we".
it's usually pretty obvious to the view that it's a one man portfolio.
need an opening picture.
the retouching section photos are really to small to tell you did anything except change the color tone in the clothing of the models.
i think restricting the site to that size feels a little akward.
the flash seems to work fine though....
keep at it.
- nooner0
i would concentrate more on your illo's. there are really nice!
- studio11080
thanks! actually, it is a we.
i appreciate the comments (and the help with the link earlier).
- ian000
Seems like the ills would sell well in the stock market.
- brooke0
With your illos, you've got a distinct style... & I like it! You need a rep. for sure. You could get tons of work.
With your photos, either put more up or none at all. Only the first one is anything special.
With your retouching, go LARGER.