Brochure crit
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- mr_snuggles0
*post-passover bump
- forcetwelve0
i like it — nice typography. i would almost like to see a secondary colour, or an alt to the red.
- Crouwel0
mostly it's because when I see the other Doll materials, they are very chunky and somewhat playfull. These pieces lose some of the playfulness and are much more rigid...
mr_snuggles
(Apr 17 06, 03:48)i like it!
what are the gradients tho?"they are very chunky and somewhat playfull."
- i know some chunky and playful thing in Amsterdam as well.. ;)
- Crouwel0
huistijl = huis + stijl (House + style)
thus written with double s!
huisstijl
;)
- Crouwel0
the switcheroo between languages is OK -makes it clear we are dealing with two. So red for engrish and black for danish but then in the middle of a para, a word which is plainly engrish is black!
xenicon
(Apr 17 06, 12:17)DUTCH!!!!!!!!!!!!!
- mr_snuggles0
thanks..
- Crouwel0
why did you not use different colours, like on the site?
you could perhaps use single colour backgrounds and make diff. languages visible by using different styles/weights of fonts?
- kelpie0
yeah, I totaly knew that about the dutch word, like, totaly.
I like it the new way, with the keylines -I think you're worrying overly about it, it looks great mate...
- mr_snuggles0
thanks kelpster..
yeah I showed it to my AD this morning and he was pretty stoked, I just need to get the original concept 'reflective practice' somehow worked into the revised layout/format :/
crouwel, it was decided a long time ago to just use black + 1 colour for the text. beyond that, those suggestions were shit :P
- Fariska0
I like it. the second version is a bit better, more clear. But it lacks of the color (which is very important in the website)
(but i can imagine is a hard thing to manage now)
- Dancer0
Nice Mr_S has more of structure now.
Relective, hell just put all the type in reverse and ask the viewer to look at it in the mirror.
;P
- mr_snuggles0
haha...
- mr_snuggles0
updates_
I think it's getting worse, I dunno, I'm not doing anymore until I print it out and mock it up...
Brochure:
http://www.blueprintmedia.ca/cli…Press Kit / Sleeve:
http://www.blueprintmedia.ca/cli…
- uberdesigner0
all this swiss type shit looks like a fucking eye exam
- mr_snuggles0
eye exam chic?
- dinky0
its in some language that i dont understand..
- chossy0
they are both strong well done.
- xenicon0
the switcheroo between languages is OK -makes it clear we are dealing with two. So red for engrish and black for danish but then in the middle of a para, a word which is plainly engrish is black!
- mr_snuggles0
overdesigned maybe?
- dinky0
if it doesnt have illustration of cow bells, than its not over designed