any suggestion for my business card?
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- factoryxii
did this for my school project..can anyone give me some suggestion?which one is good or bad?thx:)
- Gucci0
i think your text needs a lot of work... seems unecessarily tight in a lot of areas, and not entirely on purpose either – just a bit sloppy.
a8 has a nice feel to it. on a nice stock, i think that would be pretty sweet.
How is your tagline supposed to read? Right now it says "design business solutions" is it supposed to be "design & business solutions" or "design solutions for business"?
That's throwing me off a bit, and i'm curious.
- ********0
very normall....
- ********0
what message are you trying to tell with ur card?
creative?
professional?
- blackspade0
your typography is terrible imo :/
agree wth above, the Design Business solutions by-line is too dark/tight
- andsz0
dude.. you gots lots goin on... try editing it down a bit... clean up type - you have too many different letting / spacing combinations... clear the margins - youre way too close... i like the pixel leafy thingy but it will not show that well in print... especially tiny... decide on whats most important in your layout... determine hierarchy...
i like a8 - 9 - 12 - again stay away from the margins and distribute between the back and the front of your card...good luck.
- alkanenine0
I agree with andsz, a8-9 is nice just watchout for your margins. and just clean up the type.