site crit please
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- DanielLaskowski
hi
I tried to keep it simple, but i think it turned out to be boring. Any comments appreciated.thanks
- Bluejam0
i think there's too much text, it's making looking at the work difficult in the sense that it's getting in the way. Descriptions are fine but i wonder if it's better to show the work and offer people the option to read about it.
- jpolk0
uncomfortable looking...
also, the menus are mad buggy in safari.
- honda0
Yea, I got bored with it. Reminds me of my old boring portfolio. hehe
j/k
I think its ok, just needs a little more polishing. The concept seems to work, the execution of it seems odd.
Why no menus after you click into a section?
And I agree, let the work do the talking. Brevity speaks volumes.
- DanielLaskowski0
OK. Good feedback. thanks.
- skt0
It's huge.
All of the content seems unconnected. A bit all over the shop.
I would try and tighten it up a bit, and not use the full size of the browser. There isn't enough to fill it on bigger resolutions.
- graphito0
provide .pfd and not word .doc files for your CV ...
- foreign0
be carefull with css letter spacing. it can look very clumsy.
- radar0
maybe display the work seperately, especially the banners & logos, they look very jumbled in with the text.
- todelete__20
it has some nice parts to it. i like it's simplicity but there are some things that can be improved upon.
work:websites
when you have the text and a sample of the site, try keeping the width of the text box even with the right side of the project. i notice it will change with each image but it will help clean up the page a bit. when you scroll down the text always wider than the image and it looks off.also, i'd even put the name of the project first, then the link, then the image, then the description. honestly, people only look at the pretty pictures... they don't read.
other than that and what was said above i like it.
- studderine0
i think you went too far with your site. your strong point is obviously your work. erase it all, white page, .pdf linkage. done.
- not_lebowski0
canada has special forces?
http://www.cansof.com/about_us/
maybe theyre rocket powered moose or something
- not_lebowski0
also, your site sucks but your work is decent
- wristtattoo0
: /
- todelete__20
i love how guys/girls give such brutal crits having no work to show for themselves.
if not_bebowski is who i think he is his real name doesn't even have a portfolio listed. lame.
- not_lebowski0
what are you jibba jabbering about? the thing obviously sucks.
- todelete__20
do you have anything to show that's better?