crit my intro
crit my intro
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- canuck_II0
I don't understand it.
Death to yer' intro. For some reason I like the little tune though.
- canuck_II0
The idea of community in your intro does not come across, faceless people coming and going in a hurry. It's not an apartment/complex I would want to live in.
- ********0
thumbs down, then? thanks everyonel for the input.
the rest of the site is 5 years old and has gotten progressively more of a mess with stuff hurriedly added along the way.
- inhaler0
I dont understand why theres a big black bar above all the animation.
the music makes no sense to me...
by the animation it makes me think this is a site about office spaces, not so much about homes. maybe think about better living type things? ...