logo crit
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- RustyBadge
First round of logo creation for a company called translation plus...
Any comments / crits / etc on the initial ideas are much appreciated.
- Dancer0
http://www.rustybadge.com/sketch…
A little elp please, what do they do?
- RustyBadge0
Sorry about not sending as a clickable link...
They are a translation bureau. Translating stuff from Swedish to English. Small bureau.
- smith_barry0
I like the idea of using the lower case 't' in conjunction with the plus symbol but I would recommend trying it with different typefaces...
I also think that, as an icon, this would work better without a larger shape around it, i.e. the square...
- Dancer0
Not DIN far to construction/industrial for me.
None of them are doing it for me.
Think about the "+' as a T??
- Bluejam0
"They are a translation bureau. Translating stuff from Swedish to English. Small bureau."
i'd look to the national flags for inspiration, especially the colours.
- RustyBadge0
"Think about the "+' as a T?? "
How'd you mean?
Anyone recommend a font which may be better for this project?
Tips welcome and appreciated btw, I'm a newbie.
- RustyBadge0
Hi Bluejam, my first ideas were based around the Swedish colours and I got a row!
He said they were "taking Swedish clients to a world stage" and didn't want to use the Swedish colours. Tosswank.
However, he DID say he "wants to use green".
- stringbean0
does the logo have to reference the importance of swedish being translated into english?
in other words, maybe use yellow and blue instead of green and black.
otherwise, i lke the top right most logo.
- stringbean0
oops. nevermind. scratch what i said.
- spendogg0
i think you can try a litter harder before you ask for a crit.
- ********0
I like the black and grey one.
But I would definately look into working the + and the cross of the t into something.
- ********0
Does this still read as translation?
Yeah, so i'm bored of my own work today.
- HumanMale0
not really.
- i_monk0
Try a capital T with a square dot spaced above it, making a T/+ combo.
I do like the lowercase t+ merger though.
- ludawg0
the lowercase t+ one does look cool, but it bears a strong resemblance to the japanese alphabet "se".