Constructive crit? please lol
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- TANGO
Just finished my personnal portfolio and would like to know what you think..
http://w3.uqo.ca/dlap/redsputnik…
and you know we designers are the worst client for are self LOL we are never satisfied LOL
- gruntt0
that's damn nice work. well done.
- Baskerville0
are we critting the site or the work?
- redefine0
the only thing that i might say is that alot of the images are just a different angel of the same spot of a piece. almost like you had 2 different compositions of the same shot and you couldn't choose so you put both. might want to try to be more selective of unique shots.
- mr_snuggles0
yep, all them images makes it a bit overwhelming...
- agentfour0
as far as the site goes, maybe just loose that cropped repeat of your logo at the top.
but nice
- lawrie0
you may want to zap those images through fireworks; the average filesize is about 250k per image, and my paltry 576k adsl took it's sweet time downloading them.
you should be able to compress them down to a considerably smaller size without a noticable loss of quality.
- ********0
it si nice LOL but i feel that the images LOL are packed a little too tight LOL give them more space LOL
- mr_snuggles0
lol
- ********0
nice work. the only one I didnt like was the first one with the people cutouts. it looks like airport bathroom signage and made me want to piss.
- daubet0
The cropped title image:
reads as 'red spunk'.
- ********0
you get that after a good cock punching
- ldww0
good work, but i agree with the others all your photographs being at different angles and all clumped together makes it hard to focus. my eye is jumping all over the place. chaotic
- ********0
- radar0
I agree kill the cropped logo, simplify the photography and maybe a more muted color to frame the work with, the blue you chose makes all the color in your images all run together
- ********0
Really nice work tango. I like that you didn't take the literal route and make the site red to go along with your name.... red sputnik.
I like the color scheme and really like the way you chose to lay out your work. Very nicely done.
- exador10
agreed about the cropped logo..
normally i dig that kind of thing, but in this case it does look like 'red spunk'...which kinda puts ya off a bit...as far as the folio work, i dig it...very nice work indeed...
and although i liked that first one with the man/woman symbols, i don't think it was your strongest work...i'd put one of the others at the top instead...i differ in the sense of some of the others here in that i liked the montage of the work..seeing it from different angles...thought it looked nice...although the suggestion of using more varied photos is a good one...
cheers
nice work dude
ex
- imakedesign0
your work is much better than you site.
- kelpie0
as far as the site goes, maybe just loose that cropped repeat of your logo at the top.
but nice
agentfour
(Feb 24 06, 05:48)^^
really nice photography though, nicely in-between a good look at the pieces and a folio teaser...
- foreign0
you should register your surname as a domain... 'le pointe' is an awesome name for a studio.
nice work. images are a bit repetitive, as someone else mentioned.
- foreign0
LaPointe that is.