Wee Crit...
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- jevad
No, I'm not after a crit of how I piss, but I'd like to hear your thoughts on an inital layout/type for:
gracias!
- ammedia0
Cool layout, not sure I'm feeling the drop shadows on the type, though
- fate_0
Nice nick, my suggestions:
make the "Hair and Makeup" fore-color the same as the background, so it's defined by its shadow.
Try finding a tall pixel font for that top nav, or just alias the one you have. I think if it was sharper it would..well, look a lot sharper ;)
- ukit0
Ummm...nice pics, very nice. Dunno, though...though it's nice and clean, I'd say this comp doesn't tell us a lot about what you have planned for the site. The spacing of the text on the lower right isn't working for me. You also might want to consider dressing up the nav a bit more - give the user something to click on.
- jevad0
I'm going for a very simple nav - I think it's obvious enough that's the nav that it doesn't need any dressing up per se...as for what I have planned - this is pretty much it - clicking right image will advance one and clicking left image will go back one...
- fate_0
Just for kicks, this is the pixel font I had in mind, BitHigh, it's available at dafont...
- Timson0
i think it's nice atm but it'll stand or fall by the way you present your content. may i suggest fast and swift transitions...
http://www.wddg.com/johnmarksoru…
- ********0
Not a fan of light thin anti-aliased text on a dark background.
I would take fates suggestion on board and also look at the text in the bottom right. Other than that, looks nice enough.
- VectorMasked0
Cute girls. I like the "hey big boy, how u doin" look.
Personally the brunette seems cuter than the other two but they are not that far behind. My only complaint with the brunette would be the her lips. They look good and kissable but they make her look so lifeless. I need a pinkish hue and....uh...wait a second, the crti is on the site!?...
sorry bout thatLooks good. nice and simple, though I don't like so much how the bottom info looks like. It just doesn't seem to work for some reason. It doesn't look tight (not the girls)
Other that this it looks like ur heading in a good direction.
- rasko40
not really feeling it, I think you could make much better use of the space by reducing the size of the large type, making it feel more classy.
Its so simple you cant go far wrong, it's pretty clean already, just doesn't look as considered as it might