Portfolio Crit
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- Rushmore
So heres the design of my portfolio. It needs to be done within the next couple weeks of the semester and I just wanted to get some feedback on the direction/execution before i started building.
http://www.theodoredesign.com/12…
the final will be all flash, it will reach the edges and the letter shapes will look better.
- sherman0
Ummm
- todelete__20
it's definetly a nice concept.... start.
not really caring for the font in the cloud. or really the cloud. make it more of a thought bubble than a cloud. which may mean less bubbles on it.
also. the giant o on the page isn't exactly round. kinda distracting.
i like the layout though and am interested to see how you'll showcase the work in the page.
keep pushing.
- blastofv0
what kind of jobs are you going for?
- neenaw0
I think you might be going backwards with this. This first draft you put up last week was nicer. Ignore the fact that rasko called you a trend whore for it. He's just a bitter old man.
- todelete__20
you had another one? i didn't see that.
and yes. ignore rasko.
- Rushmore0
thanks to everyone so far.
the fonts arent finalized yet, i was planning on breaking them up and adjusting the shapes as i work in flash, that includes rounding off the O's. i was just to lazy to do it now.
as for jobs its really just something to show teachers who may have some projects to throw me and hopefully drum up some local work. If it came out really nicely i was going to use it to maybe secure an internship somewhere.
rasko actually didnt bother me. i dont care that it was too trendy, im not looking to go buck wild with this piece i basically just need SOMETHING up with some work in it. i felt that was alittle too overdone thats all.
- Rushmore0
the other version can be seen at