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- snizl
Was wondering if I could get some feedback on a logo that I am working on for a friend. Any feedback is appreciated. Do your worst.
- skelly0
the vertical line is too thick it's almost the same width as the strokes of the letters.make it thinner for more contrast.
- biggusdickus0
i like the 4th. but maybe can ligthen the stroke's color
- lnu0
I agree with both previous posters; the line is too thick and I like #4 the best. But I would like the text to be nudged downwards a bit, and I would also like to see a #4 with the text from #1 (. instead of |) and also a version without . or | altogether.
- DavidFelt0
Agreed too! Does it have to be this typeface though and colours, how about using something 'fresh' ala the name, maybe a lighter blue, lime green etc and maybe a more modern/simple sans serif typeface...
just my 2p's worth!
- armed_rob0
I think its borring! With a word like "refresh" you can come up with some better ideas.
- myobie0
lime green would be cool
the line is too thick
i like it with the box background (it's ok without tho)
have you thought about going with a refresh icon? something like the turney arrow or something? i know it's cheesy but try it out if you havn't...
- bradpitt0
#3 and #4.
- _me_0
its a boring name, seen it before...
helv. condensed? futura? whatever... i've seen it before...
8 ideas in the same font aren't really ideas are they? just pushing type around...3,4,5, & 6 are all the same.
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what is refresh?
- nosaj0
re:fresh
- asprin0
http://www.google.com/search?q=r…
that name has been used and abused. First step would be to advise him/her on picking a new name.
- index_html0
yeah try another font maybe and start customizing it
maybe go ahead from 4 and 6
- crag0
Enter response: i like the font, maybe include a little bit about refresh then we could help you more
- stringbean0
i like 4 and 7, but something about the word 'studios' spaced out like that seems unnatural.
what kind of studio is it?
are you dead-set on that typeface?
- arseni0
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