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- brtman0
f3-A looks great!
on the R: i don't think it's thin, but the leg misses something extra like S and B (beautiful!) have.sorry if you can't resolve things with the spare pixels in there, just trying to help!
keep up good work! when finished would love to receive a copy!
- Soler0
R is too thin
- version30
reminds me of http://www.fontshop.com/index.cf…
- nRIK0
i sort of agree with winter about reading larger blocks of text set in the font - i would like to see an example of that tho
but i am amazed by how well the font is designed from an aesthetic point of view (more so than from a functional pov) - i love the curves and the uniqueness of some of the glyphs (the S esp)... well done
the font does remind of of Trebuchet is some ways [with a hint of B-FUQ/01 haha - the A & N], but overall a lovely font and like many people here, I too would love to get a copy when you release it :)
- winter0
I'm sorry if I'm being the black sheep, but i think:
1) it's a very good title font for screen or short text;
2) it's somewhat tiresome for long reading over 10 lines, given all those curves baffle the eye towards some inexisting centre. I'm not a type expert but I think a winner font must drive the eye to read one line, and then the other, and then the other.
pretty good work you're running.
- Jaline0
yeah, I'd go with the 3rd A
- sAvcy0
smoooooooooooooth
shaft! when are you gonna finish that flash gallery thingermajig? looks so hot.
- pocho0
crap...sorry Shaft. I meant the one in F3. Mucho better.
- shaft0
mon, f2 is the old A, that is said to be too narrow!
- pocho0
The new "A" in f2 look better. Me likes...you better start collecting emails cause a few people here are gonna want it.
- shaft0
V looks kinda ok, I mean it doesn't stand out as too narrow. Does it?
Isn't the new A too wide though?
Another thing, is R not ugly? :]
- Antonelli0
I think I like this one the best
http://komercja.com/flukst/f3.ht…
If you change the A, would you have to change the V as well?
- shaft0
But what about the new A's? :)
- Jaline0
Let me know whenever it's finished so I can get a copy. It's looking quite nice :)
- paolosan0
it aint bad
some details
y. says
- shaft0
ok, here's the old narrow 'A' version:
http://komercja.com/flukst/f2.ht…and here are 2 new, wider 'A' versions:
http://komercja.com/flukst/f3.ht…
http://komercja.com/flukst/f4.ht…Iren't they a tad too wide now?
- gramme0
I hoped nobody would say this ..
A is problematic in this font. If I extend it by 1px in width it loses its nice sharp top. Give it 2px and it's too wide.The ol' give n take of pixel fonts...good work so far. Also agree about the tracking. Tweak those couple things and you're rock steady.
- shaft0
I do think the A is a bit narrow.
brtman
(Jan 19 06, 06:51)
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doh!
I hoped nobody would say this ..
A is problematic in this font. If I extend it by 1px in width it loses its nice sharp top. Give it 2px and it's too wide.
- mg330
Really nice. Normally when someone presents a font it's something larger that looks like so many others.
This one is good, althoughit seems just a slight bit tight - maybe with tracking adjusted when using it it would open up some.
- brtman0
Very nice work!
I do think the A is a bit narrow.