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- simosbarba
http://www.simonesbarbati.com/in…
still not finished!!!
I'd like to have some criticts and comment.
I've worked on many version for my personal page and I still don't know I'f I'm on the right way!Thanx!
- studderine0
word up. kinda hard to read the text, but i mean its aight to me.
- nooner0
nice start. i think the copy is hard to read though.
seems like the quiality of some of those images is lacking. could be a bit shaper.
nice color scheme.
- ********0
like, nice and clean.. no problem reading it .. but get rid of the 'I respect' part.. or change it.. it grabs all the attention ...
- visualplane0
The floral patterns on the sides looks very cool. Everything looks good to me except the first piece of art from fresh cut. It doesn't seem to fit in there.
- ********0
a little less orlando bloom next time
- digitalswarm0
and a little more Selleck
- barbara0
why not place the external links at the very bottom also could add some space there as well.
doing this and moving the graphic header up, can place your work higher on the page. i agree, the images can be sharper.if the site is to showcase your photograpy work, those particular images should be the focus: in the second set of works the 1st image is a large blank front pg of a pdf download and your photos are all smaller and put against each other.
love the colours and shadows going on.
- uhohseangettio0
Not Bad Muthafucka!
Keep it up
- simosbarba0
Thanx to you all!
I'll work on that...
- ********0
very minimal approach. it's special.
love the text:
"Service Unavailable"