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- dystopiapop
On my new bizcards.
- ********0
cute
- D_Dot0
Very visual... I like them.
- dystopiapop0
thanks Canadians!
- ********0
pleasantly weird
- uncle_helv0
annoyingly decorative
- ********0
clearly canadian
- uncle_helv0
Canadian club
- ********0
Black Velvet Canadian
- harlequino0
Neat, particularly the red and white.
It's sort of 17th century Japanese painting meets, well...sperm tails.
- RobotGunslinger0
nice, a little bit too much cowbell though
- harlequino0
nice, a little bit too much cowbell though
RobotGunslinger
(Jan 7 06, 06:01)Impossible. That's like saying
"too many kittens"
or
"no thanks, I've already had too much sex."
- davi-t0
cool but u may want to put what you do on there. Business cards for what kind of business.
Also, ur last name is black!!! Thats a badass last name bro, sport that shit! How many people do you know that have that name besides Jack. Add more black! Maybe one side is mainly black. it won't be wack. ppl will remember ur name and card easier, oh smack...its Dan Black. Stop me now.
Kill all gradients. Gradients look cheezy on bc's.
- puzzack0
I would like to, but I've just gone blind.
- digilee0
you totally confused me when i saw the file was called all3.jpg but there are clearly 4 examples there ...
i need a drink!
: )
- neue75_bold0
the type needs work...
- yeeblazer0
the images are kind of interesting but what is their significance, what do you do? get rid of gradients, the very minimal attitude towards the typography contradicts the very illustrative organic shapes, is this intentional?
- gramme0
agree^
- -scarabin-0
i like the simplicity of #1, #2 says "i like fish" / "i wanna be a dragon", #3 says "i love this step and repeat thing i just discovered in illustrator" (though i love the colors) and #4 is has some kinda weird gradient that goes from "dead salmon" to "diarrhea"
love the type
- fresnobob0
Strees Builds Character
- uncle_helv0
Business cards are like a handshake, straightforward and to the point! your card like some people have pointed out doesn't give a great deal away as to what you do, just a lot of stylised visual clutter, that will look dated by the time the print run has finished! and then you're lumbered, Keep it simple, it's your portfolio that should show skill/style etc.