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- toe_knee
Its a logo for a monthly house party / club night. I was never mad on the name but the rest in the team liked it.
The only thing that 'ill repute' brings to mind is brothel / wild west / saloon type deal.
what do ye think? The more I look at it the more it reminds me of a resturant or a make of bread. The others like it, so do I but i'm not 100%thanks
- harlanerskine0
its nice. but watch your kerning on the tag line.
- Dancer0
Looks good to start with, your line work needs looking at, think about the thickness on the scroll part, perhaps vary the weight?
Good start though, seems on the moeny IMO
- rasko40
I think it needs to be tightened up a bit, too much black blob there when you could use that spac e to enlarge the type and just squeeze it up a lil tighter I think. Also, I think the type in the ribbon is too low slightly and that the ribbon is too big in comparison to the main type, which can be sorted by enlarging as above.
and yeah I'm not so sure about the name either, makes me think that they play bad house music.
- toe_knee0
thanks for the feedback. Agree with all your comments.
I think you hit it on the head when you said theres too much blob.with regards to the bad house music. that remains to be seen. We have 16 djs, 8 sets of back to back, some really good, others just starting out. If anything it'll be a good pissup. Its gonna range from deep US, to funky, to main room to electro (electro in the orignal sense of the word, not the batty ghey electro house throw some guitar riff in type shit that doing the rounds with the kiddies nowadays)
I'll post a revised logo tommorow.
Thanks again.