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- uncle_helv0
early morning response, Eeeeeewwwww!
- jpolk0
i counted 6 typefaces, am i wrong?
- uncle_helv0
Yeah man go easy on the typefaces!
- uncle_helv0
It just looks really flat, uninteresting, too busy.
- VectorMasked0
^^ what they all said
The type is the MAIN problem
- Bluejam0
the logo is getting lost within the layout. hard to read. maybe position it top left and swap with the 'issue now in stores' info.
- fifty500
^ what they all said, plus that girl is a dirty, dirty whore
- c_valencia0
Yeah, I've been battling with the logo for a while. It's not mine, it's theirs.
But thanks for the response, I'll work with minimizing the typefaces.
- c_valencia0
^ From what I'm told, the target market digs the "whores."
- fifty500
true.
- agentfour0
and the girls phone number would beee.........
- Dancer0
Who's it for?
wait
wait
There it is hiding in the bushes!!
Could not see the logo at all. Perhaps put it as a masthead similar to the mag.
I still don't know what it's for though
- studioflow0
right now it looks like every other ad of its kind- unless its not going in a car mag.., make it stand out somehow- too many things competing at once, think about relationships between the different pieces of information, you've already started doing it, just the different typefaces get confusing.. hope that helps
- mr_snuggles0
can you do something with the girls' head? Like put someone else's head on her body?!?
- c_valencia0
can you do something with the girls' head? Like put someone else's head on her body?!?
mr_snuggles
(Dec 8 05, 01:36)-----
send me a picture of your head and I'll put on there. :) ...or better yet, send me a pic of you in a bikini and I'll place in you front of the car???
just a thought.
fyi, thanks for the feedback folks.
- studioflow0
yea, on second thought, just do that..
- mr_snuggles0
check yer mail valencia, I sent you good picture to use...
- Timson0
this thread made put on aphex twin, tnx.