Need Crit on new style for me
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- HelixDnB
I started this off as an attempt at a new style and turned out pretty good imo for the first time working with this kind of style, and these colors. The person in the picture is me...kind of a self portrait if you will of my life right now - all over the place and messed up. Should be interesting to see the feedback.
All of it was done today within about 2-3 hours, like I said, trying out a new style that I think I may be working more with (I really enjoyed it). All done in Photoshop CS2.
Any feedback or criticism is appriciated - be as harsh or generous as you please - it'll help in the end. Like I said, my first attempt at this kind of style.
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Thanks again
- tank0
try to bring some rest in the compisition.also some colours are just to bright.
- ********0
i really like the paint and textured background, more designers need more organic stuff which is why i'm not too keen on arrows...arrows are just arrows sometimes...maybe make more of the stuff look like it's coming out of your head
- HelixDnB0
Some rest? what do you mean? Make the composition less busy?
- VectorMasked0
the numbers on the left look like if you had no idea what to put there.
Also I don't like the font you used for the text (porcelain??)
also it lacks some balance, but overall a nice experiment.
- HelixDnB0
"the numbers on the left look like if you had no idea what to put there.
Also I don't like the font you used for the text (porcelain??)
also it lacks some balance, but overall a nice experiment."Good points. The font's called velvet. Yea, like I said and you said - it's deff an experiment, and usually the first few ventures I do with another style are the worst, but we'll see what happens with the future ventures.
Thanks for the feedback - keep it coming