quick site crit please
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- desmo
hello pvn,
i just threw together a quick one page folio site for a few potential job oppurtunities...
im just curious to know what you guys think of it.
much thanks!
- driftlab0
you build good webs.
- Dancer0
Bit dull really, not saying that it can't be simple but I really think you should add a little colour to your structure. Plus I do not really see any differentiation (?sp) between projects, they all seem to mull into one.
Your work is good I justr feel like I am looking at one of those mags where they cram as much as they can into one page.
- Dancer0
also this:
"Dell work include email design." sounds grammatically wrong.
- jakeyj0
give it some room to breathe!
make your titles text not images.
you got some nice work in there.
- jevad0
open links in new window please
like the layout but maybe you could at least css those ugly blue links and bring in a bit more dominant typography?
- radar0
it is what it is, maybe a bit larger thumbnails, and maybe make hyperlinks orange to flow better with your logo.
- desmo0
thanks guys. much appreciated!
i litterally put this together in a matter of 2 days.
im planning on doing a complete redesign come jan 2006
- seed0
I was going to say the link colors look like they've been given no thought.
The bottom projects aren't lining up for me.
- ukit0
I know bare bones, one-page folios are all the rage these days, but that doesn't mean they're the best solution for every designer/ collection of work. I'd actually encourage you on your next site to do something more high-end and conceptual if you're up for it.
- desmo0
i am definetly going to redesign it. i only went with the one page folio because i needed to show my work online asap.