site critique, plz!
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- MrDinky0
i am not sure if there is enough to crit
- who0
is that all? I mean...where is the menu?
Nice colors...
:)
- slappy0
hahah Dinky hops on the pills and starts critting peoples sites.
*waits for this to get good.
- MrDinky0
i dont know. the relative thought on this design very hard to distinguish. i could see the designer's effort to make horizontal line constant yet it makes a stunning right turn as the textual flow begins. the color scheme is another interesting retro relational. the pink is not so dominant yet it makes a clear statement and communicates the idea of pink and its relative message. the on the other grounds the pink by offsetting the dominance hence creating harmony. the white background, as it may bee bleek and clean, does manage to break out in to starting role of Rochel Rochel. This occurs when Bette Midler is hurt in the baseball game and unable to perform her duties as the lead in the broadway musical Rochel Rochel, in which she suspect George and Jerry causing the "accidient" so Jerry's girlfriend at the time, who is an understudy of Bette's, to take the lead role.
- slappy0
haha
- zento20
you just blew my mind
- zento20
its updated: http://www.mikkaworks.com
thanks everybody for your critique, will be taken into consideration..
- MrDinky0
as i recall... it looks pretty much same..
- blackspade0
u still need to fix your title, the transparent gif, ..does it really need to be transparent?, its causing the edges to look like shite.
look at the 'S'
- zento20
yeah the idea of making the logo transparant is so i can change the background color, if i want to.
And its not really made to look that "clean", supposed to be a little dirty. but alot of mofo be complaining about it, so might change it to look more clean and polished
- Soler0
yeah - fix that logo to start. build the nav, see what happens