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- rasko40
bad choice of typeface I think, looks a bit clunky that one. Not too keen on the colour either. just needs some tweaks
- HumanMale0
Thanks rasko.
The blue will change... less vivid, unfortunately we need to have a purple in there.
You not like the typeface? I'm quite into the 'chunkyness' of it.
- rasko40
no I dont like the cross bar on the 'e', or the kink at the end of the y's descender, or the kinked l's for that matter, actually I hate that typeface, looks uncrafted.
- Dancer0
Is that Triplex?
Don't understand the use of the arrow, what has it got to do with skills??
A step in a better direction though, keep pluggin.
- Sven_sk0
i don't like the use of gadget typeface either.
it doesn't say secuirty to me
unless it was like child securityits too playful and not serious enough.
looks better though. mush better.
- Nairn0
the arrow looping back on itself suggests that you'll go full circle with these skills, and end up right back where you started. it also breaks up the text so my brain reads an amalgam of 'kills for security' and 'ills for security', neither of which are particularily positive connotations.
the text is more 'skills' than 'security'.
That said, it's much more a logo than the last one shown, and you're not far off getting it..
reminiscent of... http://www.parliament.uk/parliam…
- Nairn0
acht, what I meant was - the arrow in your shield is reminiscent of the HM treasury logo - maybe play around with that - upwards arrows... maybe even progressively taller arrows, representing skills acquirement?
Good luck!