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- piperboytoy0
i like the second one better, it has potential to look cool.
You should spend some time on your typography. it's not very interesting.
I think it would be more interesting if the back is a different color or just white with yellow and black accents. or Black with yellow and white accent.
- ArataIto0
For the postcard, It is front and back of the postcard
- visualplane0
The way you angled the text on the front is obnoxious and hard to read. It doesn't make any sense to me. The image looks amaturish, try retouching it somehow. I do like the silo of the muscular guy.
The business card works for me.
- uberdesigner0
man nipples should never be seen
- kerus0
rule one: always retouch peoples' teeth white plz
- visualplane0
man nipples should never be seen
uberdesigner
(Nov 9 05, 20:10)I don't know what to do with you uber