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- nopublik0
nice and simple, i think the buttons should be smaller, it looks so huge on my screen
- jakeyj0
take that notch down on corners. it's way too big. if you want to keep the notch, make it about a quarter of the size it is now.
- seed0
I think the nav and login box look large and clumsy. The angled lines all over kind of bother my eye. That purple gradient seems to clash with the rest of it. Maybe vary the color on behind the text and the nav. It could just be me personally.
- seed0
oh yeah I was going to say the image doesn't look very sharp. Maybe you could tone down the size of the notches a bit.
- horton0
nice ties..
but sorry that photo looks a bit dated.. mid 90's-ish.
+ it's blurry.
consulting is a pretty dry subject.. make an impact with a sharp bold image.
- inhaler0
looks nice and simple...
I would say that the pic should be toned down.. as in not in color, or less busy.
- horton0
and kern that NYCG!
- canton0
I don't think that layout is eye catchy at all. Image is blury, and everything is abit too large and stretched out. That is just my opinion.
- jevad0
ALl those notches everwhere are bewildering my eyes.
Subtle is key - accents.
That image is terrible
The type in teh nav is way to heavy.
Colours are flat.
- tenpointtwo0
thanks for the feedback you guys.
good stuff.
- seed0
I dig that Angie Louis business card. That thing is crazy!
- nooner0
loose the drop shadows.
- e_b_c0
helv and futura? for me those two don't mix well.
new photo
do about 10 more color beaks.
the cut-off corners of those boxes are too important and aren't really helping. systemize 'em?
sorry if these are repeats idea.
good start, though!
- sherman0
your body copy line lengths are to long. it makes it hard on the eye to read the paragraph.
maybe add pullout column or find a way to reduce it.
- davi-t0
Your Greek Text Layout for the paragraph at the bottom is WAY too wide...shrink that by 30%.
Kill the slanted corner thing on the panels.
Change the webpage background color.
Kill the dropshadows.
Kill the blue gradient at the top, make it a solid color.
Get a better image. That one really sux.
Colors arent so great.
Personally, there logo is so simple. I think the site could be A LOT simpler.....all black and white maybe....no rounded corners. think swiss.
davi-t
- jpolk0
hire a designer...
- jpolk0
^ and i'm really not saying that to be rude, but there's nothing redeemable about that 'site'. it woulsn't do you well to pretend it's passable.
- radar0
I would deinitely rethink those 45 degree corners, and the fact that every individual piece is a different color/gradient is a bit troublesome to me, the site looks fragmented, make it more unified and using color & type.
- JennyMarie0
I'm not feeling the colors mate.
- JazX0
sorry dude, not my style