site crit
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- Timson
been working on this all day now and it's time to take a step back. it's not really my style but the client demanded something crisp and clean. any thoughts?
- chossy0
Thats a great selection, I like the fourth one most.
- uhohseangettio0
In design theres no your style bra, I love these comps, the style reminds me of group 94, good work, if you acompany this design with some good animation it can be something real special.
- skt0
I like. If that's the style your client wanted then good job.
- Bluejam0
good work.
only crit with be the product selector page (4+5). i think you should drop the thumbnail selector and place the images in the black band, dare i say it, make them bigger.
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if you can animate the fire, that'll be a nice touch.
- skt0
Bluejam is that logo on your profile yours? Did you trademark it or have you just stuck the TM there anyway?
I work for thinkjam.com and the mark we are using is very very similar. (It's not used on the website by the way).
- Timson0
indeed, the product selector was a pain. it's just that in the dark part the shadow of the thumbs get lost and kind of kills the design.
making the thumbs bigger isn't really an option since it's gonna be over 60 pieces and would take to long to scroll...
- CFish0
Really nice
- Bluejam0
i didn't even consider it to be a logo and the 'TM' was just a flight of fancy.