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- s_t_e_w0
still looks a bit big-boned.
buttons are big, the flash between buttons and body copy is big, and the body font looks a bit small and unstyled.
- oBeseLilNinja0
buttons of blind people i guess
- Dancer0
please explain why you have TWO files totalling 550k and Why Flash, think about the user and get back to me
- -kappa-0
OK here's what I'd do...
Lose the dropshadow on the logo
Use a smaller bitmapped font on the menu item and aligh it lower left.
Change the font to verdana 11pt
Increase the FPS speed on the menu fla if you isist on using flash for that. I;'d recomend making it image based with JS...
- -kappa-0
oh and that blue section on the right hand side of the menu is not needed..
- Jugarelly0
Allong with others' suggestions:
You might want to put your swfs in the table as well. When I expand it full screen, they stack up next to each other.
Also, think about using a different photo if you can. That one seems a little THX 1138 to me.
Oh, and it looks like you need a good copy editor. That's way too much copy for a home page.
- nosaj0
Overall layouts ok. Just gotta work on the details. And ditch the Flash buttons..
- xovi0
ok so make the menu boxes smaller font too, no flash, just photos, and whats a copy editer?
thanks alot everyone really appreciate it. i will apply the changes and let you all see how it looks in a bit
- _salisae_0
lol @ big boned
and wow @ the company provides humanity! like THE humanity?
if you have to use those colors fine but pull back on them. they're way too saturated.
your concept photo .. that walk looks a little frightening and it doesn't look like a park.
- xovi0
better now? only the about and home button works for now.
- bradpitt0
Push the menu a little to the right, right now it's really close to the margin.
- xovi0
Ooh your right ok.
- xovi0
beside the menu being too close to the margin how is the layout?
- tehgee0
why so many different typefaces?!
- xovi0
which ones are different? i cant tell lol
- brtman0
errr, all of them?
seeing at least 4 different fonts
- xovi0
better? www.xovi.com
i had some help with this one =D