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- ********0
Looks cool. I would add some cool "swoooshhhh" sounds to make it hot...
- e-pill0
the eddges on the font is fuzzy...can you get it cleaner?
whats that term,...anti aliased??
but i like it!
also is it going to be any bigger, in the beggining when the (im callingthem bullets) flew to the left the title busin ess card was dissapearing but when it came to the front its good but edgy on the edges!
:)
- ********0
yea a final swoosh around the circular graphic like a shine would be cool
$0.02
- s_t_e_w0
what is it?
it starts like a newyears eve thing, and the logo takes too much time to read.
maybe do something with the words business/card/cd and the timing of showing up, and less fireworks?
- ukit0
Dunno. It looks good and all, but something about how it scales down and then zooms back in isn't doing it for me. What's it for?
- CFish0
Yeah this is going to be much bigger and rendered out at a higher res and codec. The fonts will be really clear...it's not for the web so I'm not really that restricted to file size. Just bit rate.
Thanks for the positive feedback!
- CFish0
It's just a sting to top and tail presentations. Currently its the tail of something I'm working on alongside it.
- davi-t0
Kill the horizontal flares that come from the sides. Bring the logo in sooner while the swirl is building. Kill the scale down, just do a slow scale to the final scale. Speed up the initial building of the flare using the flare trail. Add some highlights to the swirl part of the logo towards the end of the animation. Thats all I can think of. Hope that helps.