Logo Critique
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- DesignStamp
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Client: Cardio Imaging company that is creating medical equipment that will reduce time taken to scan for heart problems.Design keywords: Technology, Modern, heart, medical.
Result:
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Thoughts? Suggestions?
- version30
i like the stuff with the heart rythym more than the heart
- stringbean0
Personally, I like the top most logo the best. It's pretty corporate in the sense that the typeface is a Sans and its pretty minimalist on imagery.
The second one down is good but for me at least I look at and I think it says 'Mntara'.
Lastly the third set has a friendliness to the image of the heart enclosed that the box but for me the kerning is to close on the type. It also looks like the descenders on the lowercase 'a's are a little bit droopy.
But that's just my opinion. I really like the layout or the presentation of it all.
Really good work. I'm impressed.
- Douglas0
Right now number 2 reads as AANTRA. Maybe a version with only the big iconic A going into the N would be nice. Not even sure if it needs the crossbar on any of the algorithms. I like the final one you've choosen on the letterhead as well.
- jevad0
kern that type out
- sdrawkcab0
The heart directions they are the one i respond to the most, using the heart blip has been done many times before I'm sure. the heart graphic and the type aren't working together though, one needs to have more importance that the other. i would make the type smaller and run it along the side horizontaly. And since it's high tech does the type have to be serif, maybe a san serif all caps?
I agree that the tracking is to tight as well.
- piperboytoy0
they all look good, you should work on your typography. Not loving the typeface.
my fav is the one with the heart and the one used in the stationary from the first page.
- contia10
the text on the envelope in the right corner, where the stamp should go?
- DesignStamp0
Thank very much for the comments so far--keep em coming! I agree, type needs work and yes, the heart has been done ad nauseum. Also usage is very rough and don't look at placement yet, only look at logos. Thanks much, this rocks.
- _b_0
for me its the top one on sheet one.
really very nice!
kerning needs some time spent on it, sort that out and its a keeper.
- nosaj0
I think you have some nice looking icons and some nice typefaces (I dig both the Serif and Sans). Fix the kerning up though its holding the designs back.
- renaphuah0
i think the logos are fine, perhaps space out the Antara and keep the spaces for Medical technology tighter.