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- leftwave
hi, i've just started working on a new site design for a brain surgeon. the client is looking for a really clean and simple design with calm colors.
i welcome your feedback......
- jevad0
looks good
link?!
- leftwave0
DUR!
i'm sorry, it's been a very long day...
- agentfour0
un-justify the text
- antoine_1010
i like it, only the colours are all REALLY similar, no chance of just a little bit more contrast.
and im not sure about the links underneith the brain with the heavy underscore.. would they look better without that?
- Nac0
play with the colors a bit, some differentiating may be guude...but keep it up mang
- fresnobob0
1. Your typefaces don't mix well.
2. OK, your type in general sucks.
3. The menu is the very last thing you look at, and is way too seperate.
4. The brain ilusrtation is ugly.
5. The composition of the whole page is really bad.
- leftwave0
gee, i almost took you seriously until i saw your website
- ********0
I wouldn't have my brain fucked about with by a man with a website like that. Its a bit, "Tomy's my first brain surgery kit".
Make it a bit more serious. And lose the turquoise. And the brain. Well that one anyway.
And fresnobob was serious. And his website is quite nice.
- fresnobob0
gee, i almost took you seriously until i saw your website
leftwave
(Aug 17 05, 02:04)
---------------------------I am serious.
And thanks for the comment SKT
- paraselene0
yowza. love your site, fresnobob. i hadn't ever looked before.
and i agree about losing the candy colours and the cartoon brain.
- sajets_v20
Thewre should be an axe in that brain with lots of blood... yeah... lots of blood would be rad!
- ********0
Fashnobob - have you ever done anything with the Fibonacci numbers? Used them in Java or Flash?
- ********0
Sorry, thats fresnobob.
- fresnobob0
No, because, well, I suck at programming, but you could probably get some amazing stuff out of it. I'd love to try it though.
Oh, and thanks paraselene.
- fresnobob0
lol
- Elfangio0
when you ask for a crit in NT you normally get it!! So dont ask...or take it!!
I guess the site is, like a friend of mine use to say, "naja"! I mean I dont like it I think you could better than that, or not! Anyway it can work, I've seen worst much worst!
I guess you were not expecting like a WOW effect were you!? ;)
Hasta
Fresnobob
your site sucks, I dont like the type you use, too fucking small, BUT I do like some of the work you have there ;)
- leftwave0
yeah, you're right.
okay, i can handle it.
bring it!