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- BarryWhiteZombi
O.k. so this is pretty much what the client has picked, but they are not picky, and I.m not content with it and I'd like to improve as a designer so any suggestions on how you think I can improve this or what you might have done, anything you feel like saying, say it. I'll take what I can and try and put it into practice
(hows that for a run on sentence)
- rise0
whats the point of that bump beside the logo?
- kld0
maybe some custom bullets to reigh in the text a bit, otherwise... yea
- its_only_me0
My eye keeps going to the bump
- todelete__20
god. where do i begin. lets start with the guy in the picture. give him a mustache as a sign of POWER, then give him a big curly hairstyle like Bob Ross as a sign of KILLER DESIGN SKILLS AND KINDNESS, then give him armpit sweet as a sign of WORKING HARD, and flash those words across the screen.
Then add a clown suit to the guy in the background as a sign of COMPANY FUN and add an S & M outfit to the woman as a sign of OUR OFFICE IS FUN BUT I'LL BEAT THE SHIT OUT OF YOU IF YOU DON'T WORK HARD.
THEN you will have a great site.
Ok. Seriously I like it. It's clean, corporate and has a good color scheme.
- rise0
few other things;
I don't like how the "employment services" is just hanging out there a little lost...Put the Site Map button at the bottom where a/the copyright would be... the main navigation text looks a little blurry, mess with it a little to crisp it up...
oh and whiten that guys teeth a little... :p
everything else it looks soild...
- blaw0
i'd try to remove a bit of the yellow tone in the photo of jaundiceman.
- swollenelbow0
it's good, put it in a box and stamp it shut.
let's go get a six pack.
- BarryWhiteZombi0
Yeah I dont know what I was thinking with the "bump" . It was late and everything looked flat so I made it cloth,. Im going to work on the clown and S&M get up for sure
- brozilla0
Good People/Staffing Co.?
Seems like that dude on the phone is straight up kickin' it at work talking to his bud bragin' abot the chick he banged last night.
"Yeah....I m SMOOOTH"
- spendogg0
Nice and clean - i like the legs up in the air, if i had only one comment...
MORE COWBELL!
- lnu0
To sum it up:
• Make the yellow shirted guy look like he's one of the good people doing great work.
• Change the font in the top menu.
• Lose those curved lines.
• Lose the buttcrack next to the menu.
- MrDinky0
u suck
do it again
// playing AD
- travisbarto0
As a whole the page looks clean and simple to navigate the only distraction I see is the bump, the guy also happens to be looking at it so if i went to the site id probably try to click it....so id say lose the bump and your set.
- non0
peoplepc
- BarryWhiteZombi0
Thats a stretch