Logo Feedback
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- ArtDirector
I made this for a friend of mine, can I get feedbacks?
- D_Dot0
Elegant.. What's it for?
- instantok0
the tagline seems too close...it looks a little squished into the horizontal rule...nice though
- ArtDirector0
She's a writer who just graduated.
- D_Dot0
It's really growing on me,I love it, but if it will be put on business cards those little swirls under the line will be buggered.
- ArtDirector0
that does look tight, i'll space it out more
- doesnotexist0
that's not a logo. making fancy type with decorative swirls is not a logo! you can do better.
- grayhood0
maybe capitolize the D on the end to balance it out alittle???
looks nice though.
- QuincyArcher0
i dig! very nice.
- the_doctor0
put some space between the RD and AN
use straight small caps .. the capitalized W is too close
since her concept is 'ideas on the line' referring to the singular line i'd ditch the top line
- ArtDirector0
Printed results
- i_monk0
If you're going to keep the tagline that tight, bump both lines up so it's all tight. And center it all. It looks like it's off the the left.
- 2cents0
i think overall its too crammed... little flourishes are too tight to the text and not enough space between the upper and lower text... between the separating line.
give it some space
- 2cents0
oh shit... so its already been printed?
i guess you can scrap my feedback... although i still think its very valid.
- ********0
I made this for a friend of mine, can I get feedbacks?
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ArtDirector
(Jun 24 05, 12:23)
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nice, but let me guess is it...
-a used book shop with a small tearoom?
-a learning center for gays?
-a gallery of crossword puzzles?
- doesnotexist0
way too ambiguous and vague
- Donvitoviti0
tag line seems to close to the line and the tag line should also prob be 2 points smaller. They are too close to the same size right now.
but over all good
- sajets_v20
Space between RD and AN should be bigger. And space between the WORDS WANTED and the underline should be bigger IMO. To balance it out with the line above the text. And agree that the tagline should be bit more below also.