Cool or NotCool
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- brandelec0
cool, but in a g-a-y way
- arinya0
Nice! I'd make it dirtier though.
- gruntt0
cool poster.
gay because it's a pdf.
post a jpg homeboy you'll get a much better response.
the poster is quite cool though.
- actual0
poster = cool
making me wait for adobe acrobat to open= not cool
- e-pill0
not cool..
the red pattern bothers me and the white space with arrow to bottom is wasted space. i dunt know.
- TResudek0
My Bad
TR
- opiate0
more dirt, maybe screen back the pattern a little more and grunge up the red background
- brandelec0
make it gritty, and may be lose the pattern on the black behing "big city rock"
- ********0
i'd lose the bg and certainly those erratic blots on the right that AI does when you're vectorizing images.
- Bio0
it all depends.
define G-A-Y.
- ********0
I don't dig the texture on the red- either go super grunge or super clean
- Nairn0
i think the 'Big City Rock' needs to stand out much more. That solved and I think it'd make a great poster - nice work!
- TResudek0
REVISION:
Made some changes, check this out and give me a little crit:
Original:
Thanks,
TR
- mayo0
is the kerning supposed to be off?
- Soler0
I like #2, but delete the red pattern yo. It ain't that cool. Plus, I think guitar would look cool if it were just on white. Its a littl eoverdesigned, but good job overall.
- JennyMarie0
I know where you're going with the typography, but it's not quite working. Looks cramped, not stylized. Are you making that for the band or the Troubador? My friends are in a band called Soft. I don't know if they are going on tour, so if that's not them, they are going to be pissed. ha.
- shellie0
mmm maylee