biz card crit
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- rabattski0
the most important info seems to get lost visually imho.
- swollenelbow0
3
- MrDinky0
the last one
lose the lines at the top
so colorful !
- rabattski0
simplify, simplify.
- johndiggity0
first one without the white boxes.
- gruntt0
it's a coin toss between the 2nd and 3rd.
- uberdesigner0
those colors make me want to claw my eyes out
- jakeyj0
way too much going on imo.
- kbags0
#2 but simplified
imo it's a wee bit too harsh...
more negative space
the most important part of the card is your contact info, and that gets lost.
- Fidget-design0
I think I just puked a little in my mouth.
This is so gare-ish. Drop all the colours and use much more white space. Far too much going on.
Choose another typeface aswell. Avant Garde is not giving the info any prominence.
- actual0
thanks to everyone for taking the time to give feedback.
here's the new version with people's suggestions in mind
should i stay with the layout i have in place or should i try some others?
should i keep the type i have or try something else? i think only fidget mentioned this.
i felt the type i have in place matches well with the logotype.
just trying to get some second opinions.thanks again
steve
- mitee_0
better, but PLEASE GET A NEW COLOR PALETTE! please....and change that digitz font, looks 1980's trying to be futuristic and crap.
- kld0
I had a client reprint cards with a new employee with a long name plus a hyphenated last name. It sucked. It was laid out similar to yours. Think about the longest possible name and then work out the layout
I would also look at different typefaces for the info.
- -ryan_harrell-0
colorful, that shite is all over the place.
- t_rock0
try lining up your text (name, number, etc.) in line with your ".com" in the logotype
- uberdesigner0
purple and red are never a good mix
- xrusos0
this works for "brian" but will it work for "stephanie"? your text is pretty tight, so unless "brian" is the only employee... you're going to have to make some changes.
- kbags0
much better!
the text aligntment looks a bit awkward...and i'm not crazy about the logo placement, both in relation thereto and in general.
also, being that this is not a calling card for a designer, the street address might need better prominence? just a thought.
the back looks fine as it is.
keep at it!