Layout crit

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  • bighappen

    Hello i have just started redoing one of my friends sites, as i feel it is boring and dull now ( i made it when i started out last year, learning css.)

    I have started playing around with an idea for a new look for the site. It is a pretty small site, i.e one page...

    I realise it is not much to go on, one image but i thought i would ask if any one had opinions on it?... too cliched?

    Old site can be found:
    http://www.unncutproductions.com…

    thanks :)

  • Hym0

    why not ask your friends opinion ? at least in such an early state.

    Uncut.. and you show an image of a cut image of a texture of a cut piece of stone, now the scissors makes sense

    but tilted alignment is not bad, the te contrast between opaque box and texture works

  • Hym0

    "image of a cut photograph of a.."

    heh i must be running low on cycles, didn't even notice it said Unncut instead of Uncut

    if the theme is being unusual, seeking contradictions then it makes kinda sense.

  • bighappen0

    "why not ask your friends opinion ? at least in such an early state."

    He is pretty much ok with what ever i do as long as it looks good.... and does it's job... the perfect client :D

    "image of a cut photograph of a.."

    heh i must be running low on cycles, didn't even notice it said Unncut instead of Uncut

    if the theme is being unusual, seeking contradictions then it makes kinda sense."

    - :D i'll be honest i hadn;t really thought about thaat as the theme but i do kinda like it, thanks... yeah i know, crap designer missing the obvious idea... whoops

    You have given me an idea. I might try and see if i can link the dotted line with the angled cuts so it relates better.

    Thanks for the feeback, much apreciated