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- Bureau
Ok folks. Some of you saw that logo I was working for a mortgage broker. Now I designed the site and would love to hear from you guys. Here it is.
Thanks.
- piperboytoy0
I like the logo, but the site is kind of bland. The graphics don't really match the style of your logo.
- Nac0
needs to be a bit tigher, cohesive like mentioned previously, but good start with the colors
- QuincyArcher0
not bad. but i agree, the logo doesn't quite match the site...
- locnoi0
Nice and clean. Not too sure about the positioning for "Apply Now for a Loan" - button. And also maybe tighten up the space on the top portion of the page a little. Nice colors.
- mrdobolina0
maybe make those colors a bit richer. the type is a bit too faint for me.
- Bureau0
Great feedback so far. Thanks folks.
As for the logo, I was thinking that I would make the colors match more with the site. Im also not crazy about the position of the logo. Its shape makes it hard to work with the design.
- mrdobolina0
Are you from a print background originally, Bureau?
- Bureau0
Nope. Ive been doing Interactive design for as long as I can remember.
Does my work seem like it I am?
- piperboytoy0
the logo is great, not sure if you agree but I think it will go well with a design that is similar to this http://www.winterfresh.com/
I can see it on a colored background with white border.
- Bureau0
I think that winterfresh site might be a little too much for what Im doing.
Bu thats for the reference. Ill work with it and see what I come up with.
- instantok0
i think it could benefit from using a top nav rather than a left nav...use the nav to create more of a strong visual header that works with the logo...the problem right now is that the design is so minimal it loses some grounding...elements seem to float...i'm not really digging the dotted squares or arrow...you could do something a little more graphically rich with the headings...great start though
- Bureau0
Thanks for the input instant. I was thinking about moving the nav just so the logo doesnt feel lost but I really like how the nav is on the left.
- spendogg0
I am not a web designer, but compostition wise it does not feel like it is grounded. I am a big fan of neg space - but it just drops off from the top, there is nowhere for the eye to go. I like it clean but there is no strength to lead the eye around.
- jevad0
meh