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- ilrapa
What do u think about this?
A logo for a restaurant, a bar-restaurant. any ideas?http://www.ilrapa.mfactory.co.uk…
thank u pbn
- ********0
This is the PVN. Fuck off.
- save0
like it
- ********0
Sorry. Fuck off sounds a bit wide.
- fifty500
haha, skt!
by the way that logo is in pdf format. that's a no no.
- ********0
nice, only weak spot I see is the proximity of the dot of the 'i' to the hand. maybe flip the hand horiz?
- Bureau0
I dig it. There is something weird about it being on an angle. I really like that its on an angle but something just doesnt feel right. I cant put my finger on it.
What typeface is that by the way?
- instantok0
i like the concept but the type looks heavier than the illustration...i think slimming down the type and refining the illustration with some subtler detail would make it work a little better
- ilrapa0
the type is a bodoni bold italic, and i'm italian.
this was unecessary.sorry about PBN, thank u PVN.
Better?
- save0
nice
- warheros20
bring some color into it. or make it a different color other than black, something more fun. i would move the wine bottle & glass further apart to match the spaces inbetween the letters.
i would also go with a lighter weight on the type. but that's just my opinion.
- TResudek0
Try working with the hand... Looks a little awkward in the position it is in - might look better if you could distinguish the fingers.
TR
- Bureau0
Im italian as well.
- ilrapa0
gif, no pdf
is this italian guy on the right way?
i was thinking about to put something different on the plate, like a chicken, a cocktail, a girl...
- swollenelbow0
no gradients...