Logo Crit...
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- fifty500
well, what is it for?
what's the intended audience?
Honestly, for the first 6 seconds or so, I couldn't get past the text. It was set in a font that should really not be set with words running together like that, and the intentional misspelling was hard to get past at first.
regarding the logo, of the ones you've submitted I liked where you were going with the one in the top right or bottom left. the bottom right one was nice the first time i saw it but upon second glance it takes my eyes a while to adjust to it because of the "levels" of colours. the red beckons to jump to the front, while the white and black interrupt it. it's just strange i guess.
- Nac0
a bit heavy on the black...but hey if thats what it supposed to be...good start yo!
- stevo0
Its for some kind of youth intervention program...the client wants an eye, and in side the eye there should be the letter P and I.
- Witt0
why do you let clients tell you what to do if it's you who knows what's best for them?
- stevo0
i dont know
- Witt0
neither do i. it happens to me too.
- warheros20
shouldnt put red on black or vice versa. that font is incredibly illegible.
the top two are okay, just keep refining. play with the form the p and i make in the eye. i dont know if im down with the eye lashes.
- k770
i think the i and p get lost in the eye. why? i think the lashes draw my eye away from the iris area of the, ahem, eye. nice lashes.
- brooke0
Take out the eye.
- warheros20
good one!
+2 pts for brooke