girls camp site crit
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- leftwave
i'm designing a new website for a girls summercamp in new hampshire.
all feedback is welcome!
http://leftwave.com/indevelopmen…
the existing site is at http://www.robindel.com
- stewart0
neat, but i expected something more colorful.
and why a logo-is "Welcome to" if you have a better logo on top?
and why all the different fonts?
they don't really fit each other.
- BZZZP0
round wide, round narrow, 45°... pick one and develop a methodology from it.
same problem with typography. use 5 less fonts.
- leftwave0
geez, i totally went font crazy and somehow didn't realize it. great advice - thanks!
- pascii0
more friendly colors, less fonts, drop that ugly W
suggestion: don't use those techno-fonts
- leftwave0
killed some fonts - is this better??
- pascii0
forget this futura, and use some summer colors
- stewart0
more colors indeed
it's now a bit of a christian girl camp
- leftwave0
the camp colors are navy and white (blah)
- hatemail6570
The girls in the photo look really creepy.
- k770
tight. i like the stencil font, i think you should have some fun with that. make it kooky yeah?
who's that counseller? that long sleeve style is uhm when is bed time nahmean?
- radar0
I would kill the sharp edges and 45 degree buttons and keep it all more rounded and playful. Maybe make lake photo a duotone and leave girls full color, different lighting makes it all wierd.
- leftwave0
hi radar, i like your duotone suggestion. thanks. what do you think of this now?
http://leftwave.com/indevelopmen…
(scroll down for changes)
- ethios0
Looks to corporate, not very fun and friendly as I would imagine the camp is, if you get my drift
- k770
"welcome to camp robindel" twice? superfluous. put the stencil in different shades of blue man. or something. fun it up, ethios is right.
- nLHb0
put an exclamation mark after "come share the robindel summer experience" so it says
come share the robindel summer experience!
that makes it more lively!
- gruntt0
make the blonde counselor nakeder.
- lunasquared0
Your layout looks good, maybe add some more fun colors?
- nLHb0
do people not read other peoples responses?
- Lesk0
Sweet mother of fucking jesus, that long haired blond girl is like super hott.
- scarabin0
it needs less clothing