Logo crit
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- k770
they're all the same. you're not thinking outside the box, imo
- jevad0
might I be so bold as to sugest some colour variations, a new typeface, and a bit o'kerning
- Luckypp0
Agreed they are very similar, however they read differently to me on each one.
Basically the main concept is done, this is a finalizing detail.
- version30
i thought it was lg ish but in review not really
but i'll add what i was going to write along with that
start over
and a new tid bit
spend more than 5min on it
- piperboytoy0
yeah they are all the same, you need to have variations on different ideas to be able to find out which one looks good.
What you have is a variation on one idea.
It looks a bit generic. The logo should represent you or your company.
I think the LPP is too close together it looks cramped.
- jevad0
there's a concept?
- Luckypp0
Spend more than 5 min on it?
Uh, I guess there is a lot of hate in the room tonight.
jesus.
- k770
throw in some 4 leaf clovers
- Luckypp0
Yeah there is, pity you can't see it.
- version30
a circle with text and my noting it is hate?
no.
its super simple don't be angry someone pointed it out
- k770
it's thought out, it's just not MEMORABLE.
- jevad0
you came here asking for a crit and people are trying to be constructive. If you can't take it try somewhere else.
I don't see any evidence of a concept. I see some badly kerned type in a circle. Maybe you could enlighten us?
- Luckypp0
Your opinion is not hate, your delivery of it is. I mean come on.
- piperboytoy0
I think people should have more tact when critiquing someone's work, but as a designer you should be more open minded about other people's opinions.
you asked and we give. If you can't take it then don't ask people.
I think the points made are valid and justified.
- Luckypp0
I appreciate all the reactions, and they all seem to say the same thing, start over.
- k770
it's your perception of delivery hombre. you asked for judgement, we didn't, don't judge us cause you ain't hearing what you want to. and give me 6 fresh directions by 9 am!!! DO IT!
- jevad0
I'd take that as a sign the it's not working no?
- Luckypp0
lol
fine fine, perhaps I was the one with the long day then.
- Luckypp0
jevad,
yeah that was kind of my point.
- k770