logo critique
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- BarryWhiteZombi
Im beginning this logo so Im going to try and take these further, but was looking for some feedback and suggestions in the meantime.
http://coleyinc.com/temp/logo.ht…
Thanks in advance
- skt0
Middle one.
- BarryWhiteZombi0
Also meant to add it will be for an employment services agency. which I will also have to add into the logo when needed.
- uhohseangettio0
numba 1
- toastie0
#C all the way!
#A is a second
#B is too religious
- vburo0
i see potential in C.
need some work on the kerning there though.
- abizzyman0
i like the simple smile approach...
.. it's more human.
I'd take what you did with the last one - and apply it just to the 'oo' in good on the first one.
The repitious smiles on the 3rd one is too much.. just use the word 'good'.
- toastie0
i liek the repetiotion in #C, it implies the multiple 'people', the smile in #A is not noticible and looks like an underscore.
- johndiggity0
numero dos. the others are too people pc'ish.
- version30
number 1 only
# 2 is sara lee
# 3 is amazon/joe boxer
- Bureau0
I really dig the first one. The other 2 arent bad but the first one just seems very simple to me. I like what you did with the "g". Maybe you can do the same thing to one of the letters in "people".
- 2cents0
C
- BarryWhiteZombi0
Does anyone know of a good source of old signs and ads?
I thnk I want to take B more towards old hardware store type signs but I need to do it a little more contempary and The other Two are a little "People PC-ish" but they are pretty safe and general and not to offensive to look at. So I wouldnt be dissapointed if the client went with either one.
- vburo0
looked again..
still think C is the strongest, conveying the message best.
work on that kerning and you have an absolute winner there!
- johndiggity0
tweak the box a little on number 2 so it's a little more snug and i think you are good to go. i wouldn't change or add to it other than that.
- version30
looked again..
still think C is the strongest, conveying the message best.
work on that kerning and you have an absolute winner there!
vburo
(Apr 14 05, 14:06)
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GENERIC FOR SALE
BLUE LIGHT SPECIAL RUNNING YEAR ROUNDwhat a joke
pffffffffffttttttttttttttttttttt...
- BarryWhiteZombi0
Damn version3, you could've left it at "it's generic" it was just his opinion.
- version30
he doesn't even see my posts
i think you've got some strong concepts there, i just don't want you to give up so quickly
the blue light special was to him and his exclamation point not your work
I hope you keep tweaking ir past the standard fonts
i admired what you did to the g in version 1
its good to change fonts not just use them like 2 and 3 do is all
- Rand0
A
- Mimio0
A
- BarryWhiteZombi0
version3
I definately want to take all of these past where they are. Right now number 3 is just futura with parenthesis for smiles, and it is definately generic. but I have two days so I have to get a few I can show done and try to rework them tomorrow.
Also I didnt think you meant the comment for me, I just thought "what a joke" was kinda harsh to him. But if he has you on ignore have a ball.