Feedback anyone
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- naina
Would all you fantastic people please go visit www.aside.in and give me some feedback about my work? Please...
- josimarX0
nah, cannae be arsed.
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- naina0
Lambasting or whatever - I need to know the general opinion
- josimarX0
my general opinion is – dump the quote, lose the MONTAGE.
- ********0
just joking, it's pretty fresh in terms of collateral, but I'm not too hot on the presentation
- swampygav0
I think it looks nice and clean, but I'd prefer a more human touch. But that's me.
- vburo0
well...
back to the drawing board.
sorry.
- naina0
Not for the website per se - but about my work - there are links at the bottom of the page - I am still working on the website! What you see is a temp page... sigh
- blaw0
it doesn't really look like you put too much effort into this. it's just some opening text, a large image, and a bunch of links all grouped together at the bottom.
as a visitor to your site, where do you want me to go? as it stands i have no idea.
- vburo0
ah k sorry... will check again.
- save0
- clicked link
- moved mouse over everything
- couldn't be arsed searching for navigation anymore
- closed window
- josimarX0
oh, now I get it.
still shite.kidding, nah, I like the illustrations, especially the semi permanent one, very miro.
- vburo0
there's some bad and some really fresh items there:
http://www.flickr.com/photos/nai…i'd think i'd start with weeding out the bad and make a nice selection of the best and put it in a real portfolio online. not in a flickr thingie..
- josimarX0
haha save, I was very similar. then felt guilty.
- naina0
I agree, it's a quick job - I bought the space and did not want to waste it so the same day I did a quick montage in Photoshop and added some links to blogs and flickr and other places where I was putting up my work earlier... still have to start work on the "proper" website...
- blaw0
i like the work very much (and after re-reading your initial post that is what you asked. sorry for the confusion).
but you need to clean that page up. you'd be better off with a blank page with an unordered list of links than what you have now.
- naina0
Thanks! Constructive feedback... for putting the stuff onto a proper portfolio website, I'm still thinking of designs.. Don't want to do Flash coz I dunno how to do it - are there any cool sites on the web which don't use Flash?
- naina0
yeah... you are right - the block image doesn't really do much for me... links would be better till I get the website up and about - Thanks blaw