crit this please

• ilrapa

  kreker, freelances in graphic design.

  

  thank u

  ilrapa

  Flag

• ********

  0

  i got into the lettering on the BC , the letterhead was the weakest , logo is nice ...

  very clean

  ********

  0Permalink

  UpvoteDownvote

  Dogear

  Flag

  Show [[ numHiddenNotes ]] more notesAdd Note

  SaveCancel

• TNDAP0

  Repeat the swirling effect in the little box with the logo to make the letterhead pop out more and also make it more in sync with BC.

  TNDAP 0Permalink

  UpvoteDownvote

  Dogear

  Flag

  Show [[ numHiddenNotes ]] more notesAdd Note

  SaveCancel

• ********

  0

  I agree, I do like the logo and your card, the letterhead looks too bulky to me.

  I would say to loosen up on the yellow at the top a bit, maybe bring the box in considerably so it looks more like a tab than a banner of sorts.

  ********

  0Permalink

  UpvoteDownvote

  Dogear

  Flag

  Show [[ numHiddenNotes ]] more notesAdd Note

  SaveCancel