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- tenpointtwo
http://client.tenpointtwo.com/PH…
let me know what you think. Br=e brutal. It's a pro bono project, but I still want it to be as tight as can be. And if you have any ideas for how the thumbnail navigator could work, let me know. I need a good idea for a rollover animation.
- UndoUndo0
is it a site? looks like an image on the page. looks kinda alright tho. would change the font you use on the menu for something a little more fresh
- tenpointtwo0
it's just a comp right now. My biggest pet peeve is building somethign in flash, then rebuilding it cause the client didn't like the look of something they should've brought up during comp approval. So it's just a comp for now.
- boiconet0
Nice use of Univers. It's fighting with just about everything else on the page but.
- sajets0
menu is HUGE.. composition in the top half is messed up. Typo is very weak at the top also and also in the menus.
Give typo more room at the top and at the sides. Your top fades:
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which is bad in typo. It would look 1000 times better if you'd swapped the clours of "photography" and time
Overall it is weak IMO.. need more tightening and work.
- tenpointtwo0
Harsh, but appreciated. Thanks for the advice. :)
- Engage_London0
the scale of everything is too big
- imakedesign0
could do with a bit more whitespace
- chossy0
I am not a fan of the large grey stripes, I think they make my eye drift of the image.
Things could do with being a bit smaller aswell I think.
- t_rock0
I find the proportion of the background lines to be too big and distracting to the actual photos you will be showing.
- Goatlamb0
decent frame work, bit clunky for my liking though. Is the target audience senior citizens? Then decrease the font size. :)
At least it's clean and easy to navigate.
- canuck0
I would look into making the thumbnails bigger.
...But personally I would try and make it a bit more unique. There are plenty of photogalleries that look like the one you are making.... especially when you can download things like simpleviewer for free.