Logo Critique
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- MrDinky0
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but tweek the arrows a bit
- a-train0
yea, the first one is good. Make the edges sharper and mayve longate the inner points.
- brooke0
SO much better as a mark. I'm glad you took the time to rework it.
A few things:
-You may want to consider reducing the mark so that it isn't so heavy on the typeface.
-Play with different typefaces.
-Have you considered your color options yet? Looks great in BW.
Great improvement, AD. :)
- iDp0
hmm not my thing I guess...reminds me of the 2ADV esq style. I dug the direction of the previous one a little better...mo' flavah.
- version30
my only statement would be that the circle around your most recent version seems a liitle thick or thin.
i would thicken it to the width of the wings or make it as thin as the typeface.
i like it, simplicity.
- version30
go with a thicker line based on that statement
- Solid0
I see what your trying to do ...
... but I see a cross between a bat, and the sketches from 'Mothman Prophecies' ... ?
Am I the only one?
- version30
no bat
- Solid0
I see bat ears ..
- version30
like a modern, young, batman...
sent to save us from bad design.
- johndiggity0
ditch the cirlcle and shink the mark and flush it top with the text, which you need to kern.
- mayo0
i, too, would like to see the circle a little thinner and some kerning done.
- mevsthem0
would be a cool logo for a new BatMan
- mevsthem0
1 that is with out the circle
- mevsthem0
1 but with out the circle. but dosn't it remind u of batman?
- version30
THICK circle imo
- nayades0
i'm with the circle.
- f1point70
don't think the border's working.
is the circle really needed at all?reckon the visualplane needs to be broken up. either with colour or typeface weight or sommink.
- setsolid0
better, but so see "bat man" in the logo... :P