Holding page feedback please
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- zapped
Can you give me some feedback on a front page and holding shell for a website I'm working on?
Is it to slow or whatever???
Any ideas for navigation???
- ********0
- ********0
lose that oversized and completely useless pop-up for christ's sake
- 2cents0
nice image of the week from istockphoto.
- zapped0
It's an Avalanche!
Well it's Java script.. but it was ment to be an avalanche!!!ok I get the point - pop up for pop up sake.
- fusionpixel0
and sound from flashkit hehe ;)
- zapped0
Cheap as chips....
- zapped0
Get out... it was Garage Band!!!
I'm not that cheap!
- jeedoubleu0
boo
- jevad0
hahahah!
'boo'
hahahahha
- zapped0
Be constructive for F**ks sake!
Or is this the Rip the piss part of Newstoday?Have I published to the wrong part again???
- QuincyArcher0
i'm not diggin' the helvetica font you use...i think it clashes...
plus you've got a myriad of font tags...you could probably clean things up with css...
other then that, i like it
*runs away
- tymeframe0
i like the dotted A thing. nice swoop!
the helicoptor makes me thing video game for some reason
- josimarX0
cut the chopper off the background, stick it on white.
lose the 2advanced clouds even though your loops pretty good.
Other than that and a few type issues (like, lose the *'s), I think it's got a nice feel.
good luck
- fusionpixel0
the helicopter makes me think of clifhanger
- ********0
lmao, crit my 'coming soon' page.
hey while you're at it, crit my splash!
- zapped0
Nick your egos too big!
I just wanted some pointers, or do you have to be a web god to write here?
If so maybe you should post a message telling everyone.
- jpolk0
nick, your splash is nice. concept reminds me of the sagmeister adobe poster a bit...
the e doesn't look muck like an e though...
:P
- jpolk0
also zapped... what the hell is a 24 hour world of creativity supposed to mean?
- 2cents0
zapped... you haven't lurked very long here have you?
9 out of 10 times asking for a crit on a holding/splash page is gonna earn you some heat.
just the way it is... we want to see some content.
- acescence0
that fancy js window stuff you stole from our favorite site daverushton.com doesn't work in safari.. in case that matters.
:)